Tuesday 12 April 2016
Stockcars by Makayla
On Saturday I went to stock cars and my mum reckons she nearly won. My dad drives the big water tank. He had to wet the track three times. I got to go in the tank. I asked kids if they want to come on it. I got to go in the jeep. I had fun. You would like it if you go in it . I got to go on my mum's car. We went into the track.
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This is a very interesting and detailed recount. It sounds like you enjoyed yourself!
ReplyDeleteLovely Drawing Makayla also amazing story sounds like heaps of fun
ReplyDeleteCampbell: Lovely Drawing Makayla, great story sounds like heaps of fun
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like a lot of fun. You must of been so happy because going to the stock cars is really spectacular.
ReplyDeletethats really cool and i like the way you have structed your writing
ReplyDeleteThat is really cool and I like the way you have made your writing really interesting!!
ReplyDeleteOlivia: Cool drawing Makayla. And a cool story aswell!
ReplyDeleteSounds so fun getting to ride in the stick cars
ReplyDeleteNice story Makayla it is really descriptive and interesting and your picture is so colorful and it is like the picture came to life. Jessica Room 7 :) Nice job
ReplyDeleteGreat job Makayla. It was a great illustration too. - Anya.
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you put a lot of time and effort into your writing and picture. - Carter.
Ka pai - Will and Room Kea.
You are lucky, makayla, to have a fun night out with your parents. I liked the way you talked about what each of your family members did on the night. Great story thanks for sharing. Kia ora.
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