Camouflage by Emily
This penguin has dark blue on its back. A seal is hunting the penguin. He follows the penguin but then he gets lost. He decides to swim up. But all he could see is darkness. He decides to swim down. But all he could see was lightness.
Good job,I love the words used to add more detail
ReplyDeleteVery creative story,
ReplyDeleteJake room 6
Great description Emily!
ReplyDeleteGood job Emily. I really liked your story.
ReplyDeleteThat was great it was very hard to find the penguin very nice ending also. Great Job.
ReplyDeleteThat's really cool Emily. We love your picture. From Holly, Eva and Ahleea
ReplyDeleteThat was a really nice story how the penguin escaped the seal.
ReplyDelete- Room 7
Good story Emily I like your picture. from room 7
ReplyDeleteKia ora, Emily. This is an incredible story, with beautiful imagery which I really love. The title is a great introduction to what you shared as well. You have a real talent and should keep on sharing your lovely thoughts.
ReplyDeleteWell done Emily. What a wonderful description of the seal hunting the penguin. I also enjoyed looking at your picture which also helps to describe the story. I am very pleased that the penguin managed to hide away from the hungry seal to live another day.
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