Wednesday 29 March 2017

My Mum By Nelle

My mum wears glasses. She has soft skin. She arranges play dates. My mum bakes muffins. My mum tucks me into bed. She loves me and I love her too. She has black hair. Her eyes are blue like the sea. My mum makes me happy when I am sad. My Mum used to live in Christchurch. She had a dog but it got run over. Then she had another one but it got lost so my Mum got a cat but... it got old and it died. Then she went to college and married Dad and had us. My Mum is as sweet as a lolly. My Mum is as small as a mouse. My Mum is as tidy as a bed. My Mum is as good as a pie and as soft as a cuchion. She is very kind and I love her round the Universe 100 times.

Rapunzel by Sophie

Rapunzel lived in a tower.  Mother Gofrill shouted, "Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your  hair". Rapunzel let down her hair.  
Mother Gofrill said, "You can come down into the world for a week with me in my house and visit your real Mum and Dad. But you have to stay living with me. You can keep some flowers that are purple. If you are naughty you have to go back to the tower".   




The End   

Farmer's Market By Leo

One day I saw a parked truck with lots and lots of vegetables. I hopped in the cab and off I went. I saw a sign that said Farmers Market so I went that way. 

When I got to the market all of the vegetables went on to a cow. I hit the truck's brakes. The truck went round in a circle and knocked down the market. The farmer was very cross. I had to repair the market. 

The End. 

By Stella

My mum.
My mum is small. 
She likes to hang out with me. 
I love my mum and my mum loves me too! My Mum is amazing. 
My mum has curls and she has blond hair and she likes to cook. 
My mum is as cuddly as a kitten. 
I love my Mum. 
My mum is as beautiful as a queen. 
My mum can do anything. 
I love my mum.


My Dad By Cameron

My dad isn't afraid of anything. 
My Dad can eat like a horse and he can swim like a fish. 
He's as strong as a gorilla. 
He's as smart as an owl. 
I  love my Dad and you know what? 
He loves me and he always will!


Hiwi The Kiwi by Max



Hiwi the Kiwi's Concert 

Minstrel taught us about water safety. You always need a bucket of satly ice for the fish.

By Max

Monday 20 March 2017

My Brother by Alex

My brother is 18 years old and his name is Luke. 

It is his first year at university and he takes the train to get there and he tickles me a lot, like 40 times better than I can. 

My brother is fun to play with.          

Thursday 9 March 2017

Edward Bear

Ruma Korimako wrote this story together about Edward, our class teddy bear.
Each student contributed a line or two.

Edward is the king of the soft toys. He is friendly. The children in Ruma Korimako take Edward home every day except on Saturday and Sunday.

He makes a squeak in his hand when we squish it. He hears us say "Edward". 

Edward is soft like a cloud and he has a bow. Edward has a shiny bow. He has a bow tie that is light brown and his bow is a ribbon. Edward's bow tie is a reddy browny cool bow.

Edward has bluey black eyes. His eyes are like a shiny light browny black. Edward's eyes are shiny like a diamond. In the light his eyes look bluey blacky.

Edward is a brown bear. Edward has soft fur. His fur is a browny yellow and soft. Edward is a furry brown yellow fellow. His fur is light in the light and dark in the dark. His fur is like soft silk fuzzy fur. Edward's fur is as soft as a bunny. Edward feels soft and when you hug him at night he feels warm.

Edward was fishing. He was trying to catch a snapper. Edward was having no trouble with a snapper while I was having too much trouble with a great white shark.

Edward loves our class. I love Edward and he loves me back. I was lucky to get Edward. I like to have a hug with Edward. I love Edward.