Monday 11 April 2016

I'm Going Away on Holiday by Megan

In the weekend I went to Auckland and me and Mum and Dad went on a scary ride. It was high, super high and higher and higher and then boof! IT WENT FAST!        
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous1 May 2016 at 17:24

    Why was the ride scary and where did you go on the ride Megan?
    I really liked your story it sounded like you had lots of fun
    from Dannielle

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  2. Anonymous2 May 2016 at 14:11

    When I went to Auckland for I also went on a big scary ride. It made me lose my breath!

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  3. Anonymous2 May 2016 at 14:59

    Wow! That sounds exciting! I like how you described the ride and how it was really tall!

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  4. Anonymous3 May 2016 at 14:07

    Awesome! that sounds so fun i'm so jealous. I bet it was super fun!!

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  5. Anonymous3 May 2016 at 14:09

    That sounds pretty fun!! :)

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  6. Anonymous3 May 2016 at 14:13

    I thought that story was cool and the ride sounded fun

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  7. Unknown3 May 2016 at 19:55

    Kia ora. I love the words you have used in your story - I can almost hear you and your family on the rides! Thanks for your neat story.

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  8. Unknown4 May 2016 at 01:14

    Wow what a cool story! I have to agree the ride at rainbows end was scary. From mum val inthout-davis

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  9. Unknown4 May 2016 at 01:16

    Wow what a cool story! I have to agree the ride at rainbows end was rather scary. From mum val inthout-davis.

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