It's really slippery and deep. The rain is booming with thunder. There's going to be water everywhere.
I wonder how we're going to get home in the terrible rain? If little brother or sisters were here they'd like to play with their bath toys in the rain. The rubbish bin looks so little.
It's so deep that we can't get around the school. The school is so flooded that it looks like it's the sea. Maybe the cars might flood. Some people have seen the flood so big. It's hard to get home. I haven't seen it before.
The rain is so deep that some people have trouble walking around. People have to walk in their bare feet and not wear their shoes. Maybe you will have to take your shoes off to walk. The rain feels like hail. Trains might get stuck in the water. It's super-duper deep.
Well that was a different end to the school day. Hope everyone got home safe.
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ReplyDeleteThat was a pretty scary day .The writing here is fantastic .
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ReplyDeleteWow this is very descriptive. Well done Korimako!
ReplyDeletegood descriptive writing. I really enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteI had to take my shoes off It was Yuck
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