Thursday 9 March 2017

Edward Bear

Ruma Korimako wrote this story together about Edward, our class teddy bear.
Each student contributed a line or two.

Edward is the king of the soft toys. He is friendly. The children in Ruma Korimako take Edward home every day except on Saturday and Sunday.

He makes a squeak in his hand when we squish it. He hears us say "Edward". 

Edward is soft like a cloud and he has a bow. Edward has a shiny bow. He has a bow tie that is light brown and his bow is a ribbon. Edward's bow tie is a reddy browny cool bow.

Edward has bluey black eyes. His eyes are like a shiny light browny black. Edward's eyes are shiny like a diamond. In the light his eyes look bluey blacky.

Edward is a brown bear. Edward has soft fur. His fur is a browny yellow and soft. Edward is a furry brown yellow fellow. His fur is light in the light and dark in the dark. His fur is like soft silk fuzzy fur. Edward's fur is as soft as a bunny. Edward feels soft and when you hug him at night he feels warm.

Edward was fishing. He was trying to catch a snapper. Edward was having no trouble with a snapper while I was having too much trouble with a great white shark.

Edward loves our class. I love Edward and he loves me back. I was lucky to get Edward. I like to have a hug with Edward. I love Edward.

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