Thursday, 13 August 2015

Room 1A's Wonderful Winter Writing

We are working on descriptive writing this term and this week our challenge was to use our senses to describe Winter. Mrs Pupuke was amazed by the wonderful language we used to describe how Winter looks, smells, tastes, sounds and feels :)


Winter - by Isaac
Winter looks like snow on the ground.
Winter feels like frozen fingers.
Winter smells like hot chicken that is in the oven.
Winter tastes like frozen ice.
Winter sounds like rain making a booming sound.


Winter - by Fynn
Winter looks like snow on a big hill.
Winter feels like snow falling down on you.
Winter smells like hot fire in the fire place.
Winter tastes like warm cookies.
Winter sounds like crackling ice.

Winter - by Jordy
Winter looks like frozen trees are still.
Winter feels like frozen hands are cold.
Winter smells like nothing because people have a cold.
Winter tastes like  snow and ice that is cold.
Winter sounds like  wind and fire crackling.

Winter - by Emily
Winter looks like  icicles hanging from branches.
Winter feels like cold fingers and cold toes.
Winter smells like hot soup.
Winter tastes like hot beef.
Winter sounds like rain falling on the roof.

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